Comments 1/3/2016 L Corselli-Nordblad: As discussed with Anton:
- It should be South Korea instead of Korea everywhere... (sorry, it's according to the style guide)
- Please add data sources below the tables and graphs
- Please add the units in the titles
- Fig 4: Exports to four... => should be more than four
- Foreign affiliate statistics: please follow the same logoc as in the introduction for inward and outward affiliates (foreign affiliates=outward and foreign-controlled enterprises=inward)
- Please change the two sentences in the last paragraphs which say "it appears that" and "it is thought that" to less subjective sentences.
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EN edits. 7th March 2016. Tim Allen